moawling's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[He Ate A Bomb-Wich]

hahaha wow markers ARE pretty awesome :)))))))))

[Daruma Doll]

Great sense of colours as usual! Have you considered AA-ing for smaller pieces like this?

maruki responds:

Thank you! Yes, I have, but I'm a total noob at aa D: Guess I was too focused on making the colors work

[moo]

I can just go on and on about your colour choices, just everything is so wonderfully clean and crisp ahHHHHHH!

ArcadeHero responds:

Awwww :3 Thanks, Moaw!

[05 Aloy from HZD]

Great AA! These dioramas that you've been doing have been turning out really well. I would just be a bit careful about banding.

ScepterDPinoy responds:

I've receive constructive criticism from other users from Facebook that can help me improve making each diorama carefully such as anatomy so making each diorama is a practice. Making AA could be tricky I will try to avoid banding so thanks for the tip!

[Biker Rage]

Great job! Working with palette limits can be tricky, but you did really well!
I would just work on your dithering and blending. Some of the fields came out kind of noisy. Trust your colour choices, and try to keep dither fields to a minimum.

[Fugen]

I love your palette oh my gosh! You have such a wide variety of textures going on, it's such a lovely tileset!

maruki responds:

Thank you for your kind words! It was all inspired in the delicate nature of this entity, Fugen. I wanted something remarkable, but not too strong, so pink was the chosen color.

[The Pearl of Her Eye]

Lovely dithering! The figures at the bottom do a great job of breaking up the symmetry.

PixelPenn responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the comment!

[Discovery in the Cave]

I love the overall mood of the piece, you also chose really warm colours.
My only suggestion would be to manually AA things! There are over 200 colours in this, and the same glowy effect can be done with way more control and precision if you do it by hand.
Look forward to more of your work!

PixelPenn responds:

Thanks! I've never considered manual AA when I made this one. Only until my latest work did I start to think using less colours in transitions can actually make it look better!

[Steampunk Scraps]

With all of the rich textures in this piece, some AA would be a nice touch.
You did a great job. I love your colour choices!

TheDyingSun responds:

Thanks! But yeah, I can agree that it would need some overall work.

[Teeny Flail]

I love this flail! You also managed to fit a decent amount of information in a small space. The colours you used for the metal are solid. IT'S VERY GOOD AND HANDSOME.